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I'd just like to point out to editors that 3 very lengthy paragraphs exist in the critical reception section about TOP's performance, which is half of the section as a whole. Yes TOP's performance was noteworthy because it was controversial in Korea due to his marijuana use leading to a difference between international and domestic reception however paragraph 1 starts with a blanket claim about his acting being criticised (where?) and then also being criticised outside South Korea, then we get a smorgasbord of reviews. Then paragraph of 2 states the opposite (it was better received outside SK). And then paragraph 3 goes back to "it was not well received outside of SK". It should be made shorter, all these generalisations made coherent and "who?" be clarified. [[User:Blocky12345|Blocky12345]] ([[User talk:Blocky12345|talk]]) 07:58, 13 January 2025 (UTC)
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